PRACTICE 4: MURCIA DOES NOT EXIST

Hellow, this week I'm going to upload the paragraph I created and the same paragraph, but the last (text) had been mark by two classmates. The texts are about the topic: Murcia does not exist.

 INITIAL PARAGRAPH

The majority of people don’t know Murcia or they criticize our way to speak. For example the residents of Madrid say that we don’t pronounce the “s” or the work terminations and for this reason they can’t understand us. But there is a funny thing aboutit, and it is that when the confinement started they came to the holiday’s house that they have in Murcia. Apart of this matter, Murcia has very fantastic things like the food, the weather, the atmosphere, among others. But there are some actions that make me a bit sad, like when weatherwoman or weathermen doesn’t talk about Murcia normally or he/she just talks few times . To conclude this topic, I’m going to give my opinion, and it is:if somebody doesn’t know Murcia or any other city of her country is a bit ignorant.

FINAL PARAGRAPH

The majority of people don’t know Murcia or they criticize our way of speaking. For example the residents of Madrid say that we don’t pronounce the “s” or the words terminations and for this reason they can’t understand us. But there is a funny thing about it, and it is that when the confinement started they came to the holiday’s house that theyhave in Murcia. Removing this thing, Murcia has very fantastic things like the food, the weather, the atmosphere, among others. But there are some actions that make me a bit sad, like when weatherwoman or weathermens doesn’t talk about Murcia or he/she just talks few times . To conclude this topic, I’m going to give my opinion, and it is this: if somebody doesn’t know Murcia or any other city of their country means that he/she is a bit ignorant.